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Parallelism occurs when compound verbs
or verbals express an action taking place at the same time or in the same
tense. When such is the case, the verb and/or verbals must be in the same,
or parallel, form.
Example: Gail sings and
dances.
("Sings" and "dances" are parallel forms of the
verb.)
Types of Parallel Structure
Placement
:: Types of Parallel
Structure
: Coordinated ideas of equal rank, connected by "and,"
"but," "or," or "nor."
Correct:
Earl loves bicycling and climbing.
(A gerund is paired with a gerund.)
Earl loves to bicycle
and to climb.
(An infinitive is paired with an infinitive.)
Incorrect:
Earl loves bicycling and to
climb.
(Here, a gerund is paired with an infinitive.)
: Compared ideas
Correct:
I like officiating basketball more than
playing basketball.
(A gerund is paired with a gerund.)
I like to officiate basketball
more than I like to play basketball.
(An infinitive is paired with an infinitive.)
Incorrect:
I like to officiate basketball more than
I like playing basketball.
(An infinitive is paired with a gerund.)
: Correlative ideas are linked with
the correlative conjunctions both...and, either...or, neither...nor, and
not only...but also.
Correct:
Josh is talented not only as a basketball player,
but also as a tennis player.
(A noun is paired with a noun.)
Josh is talented not only at playing
basketball, but also at playing tennis.
(A gerund is paired with a gerund.)
Incorrect:
Josh is talented not only as a basketball player,
but also at playing tennis.
(A noun is paired with a gerund.)
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:: Placement
Place correlative conjunctions immediately before the parallel terms:
Incorrect:
Brad has both experienced the sweet taste
of success and the bitterness of defeat.
Revised:
Brad has experienced both the sweet taste
of success and the bitterness of defeat.
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